Breakfast : me - yoghurt and blueberries, cup of tea/ Luca - pastries, white coffee
Today, I wrote back to Chris with notes and comments on the initial SFX. Some sounds seem to be working really well, and others not so much. So I listed all these points good and bad, hoping that he could make some changes and send us some revised sounds.
It is a difficult one, because we are making it with a promo feel, and we love the track (an original track written and performed by Barney Wade - Enid Blitz) so we are not sure that it actually needs SFX. However, it seems that some of the sounds are really working and helping to push the story forwards, for example the sea. So maybe we need to go really subtle with it, and use sound more as punctuation or gentle emphasis. it must not get in the way of the track in any way. I explained all these thoughts to Chris in the e-mail.
Chris called me this afternoon, and said that he had made some changes and was e-mailing some new sounds over. (That man's fast!) Luca and I listened to them (on their own and with music not mixed properly of course), and they're much better already and definitely going in the right direction, so we are excited.